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I think that for all it is very important to have people who love you and understand you. For me, these people are my family. My family lives in Yuzhnoukrainsk, Mykolaiv region. My family is not very big. My parents have one son and are expecting another child. My parents were young. My father forty-one, and my mother thirty-six years. My mom loves to knit. My dad likes to read the newspaper.
I would like to talk about my younger brother. I have a brother Dima. My brother was nine years old. He schoolboy studying in the fourth grade. Learns German. Dima takes after his mother. He has dark hair, a blue-eyed. Dima pretty boy. My brother goes to a music school and a puppet theater group. In his spare time, my brother, like watching cartoons. He is easy-going person.
We have our own family traditions that we always adhere to. Celebrate Christmas and New Year together - one of the most beloved traditions.
In fact, we are very close-knit family. We understand each other at first sight and to help each other without additional words.
I love my family.

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my brother nine years. так?

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да, есть текс

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Тогда скинь мне в сообщения весь текст на русском, а я тебе его исправлю)

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беда... не сохранил:`(

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Значит отвечай так (х Сколько в твоей семье всего детей?

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Это вопрос?

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Это я у тебя спрашиваю, чтобы исправить ошибку :D

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2-е

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А "expecting another child" - это ты хотел сказать, что третьего ждёте?

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да

Answer 1

I think that for all it is very important to have people who love you and understand you. For me, these people are my family. My family lives in Yuzhnoukrainsk, Mykolaiv region. My family is not very big. My parents have two sons and are expecting another child. My parents are young. My father is forty-one, and my mother is thirty-six years. My mom loves to knit. My dad likes to read newspapers.
I would like to talk about my younger brother. I have a brother Dima. My brother is nine years old. He is schoolboy studying in the fourth grade. He learns German. Dima takes after his mother. He has dark hair and blue eyes. Dima is pretty boy. My brother goes to a music school and a puppet theater group. In his spare time, my brother likes to watch cartoons. He is an easy-going person.
We have our own family traditions that we always adhere to. Celebrate Christmas and New Year together - one of the most beloved traditions.
In fact, we are very close-knit family. We understand each other at first sight and help each other without additional words.
I love my family.

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спасибо вам большое

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Рада помочь) Удачи с английским ;)